He’ll help her solve a mystery, but they can’t risk their hearts.

A devastating injury ended Theo Haven’s pro-football career, but he’s made a good life for himself in his hometown. The high school teacher and football coach might be single, but that’s by choice. And his work bestie, Penelope? She’s one of the best parts of his job, but they’re just friends.

No, really. Not the sort of friends who are secretly pining for each other or destined to hook up. Just… friends.

Art teacher Penelope Fallbrook is stuck in a rut. When a locally renowned artist dies suspiciously, she channels her restless energy into amateur sleuthing. Who better than her best friend Theo to help her search for the truth?

When Penelope’s life comes crashing down, Theo is there, picking up the pieces and offering a place to stay. Best friends become roommates, and living one room away might be too much temptation.

As they dig deeper into the mystery of the artist’s death, secrets unravel. Are they searching for a murderer? Or uncovering the work of a serial killer?

And Penelope might be in danger of becoming the next victim.

My Review

I have adored coming back to Tilikum, WA for each new release in this small-town romantic suspense series, and I was excited for Theo’s story.

Theo is a high school teacher and football coach in his small hometown. This story brings the autumn vibes early with crisp air, football games, and mountain-town charm. Theo loves his life and has a great friendship with Penelope, whose nerdy personality matches his own. At the same time, he is open to new opportunities outside of Washington. Theo also suffers from migraines due to a previous neck injury, so there is some chronic illness representation and real-life struggles woven into the story.

Penelope has a boyfriend, but their relationship is clearly not healthy and is already falling apart. She feels stuck in her current situation and unsure of where to go next. I found this relatable because many women find themselves in relationships that leave them unhappy and unfulfilled. Even though parts of the story felt predictable, I still wanted to see how things would play out for Penelope.

The migraine representation and long-standing friendship between Theo and Penelope felt authentic. They have history, normal lives, and individual passions. Theo loves sports while Penelope is an artist. What surprised me was how much of the suspense revolves around the two of them playing amateuur sleuths. Most of the mystery is not personal to either character and feels more like small-town curiosity than a direct threat.

I love Claire Kingsley’s books, but this one was not what I was expecting. I never felt like I got a deeper understanding of the characters or their chemistry because so much of their time together is spent investigating a mystery that has little connection to their personal lives.

The nicknames, fist bumps, and general mannerisms of these midlife characters often felt at odds with their professions and ages. I also struggled with some of Theo’s nicknames for Penelope. The romance is a very slow burn friends-to-lovers story, but neither character seems willing to embrace their attraction. Many of the angsty moments felt more like teenagers trying to navigate a crush than two mature adults figuring out their feelings. That said, I did appreciate that both characters were a little nerdy. Theo may be a former athlete, but he is far from a stereotypical jock, and Penelope’s curiosity and interest in solving mysteries made her stand out.

As the forced proximity increases, the romance begins to heat up. Unfortunately, these scenes did not always work for me because the characters often continued to act younger than their age. Of all the Haven Brothers books so far, this one felt the most immature, and that made it difficult for me to fully connect with the story.

I did appreciate Theo’s point of view. He is sweet, emotionally available, and genuinely caring. However, he also spends a lot of time second-guessing himself. While it is refreshing to see a male main character who is open about his feelings, some of the internal drama felt repetitive, and there is a small miscommunication element that added to my frustration.

The quirky community elements and small-town charm that I enjoyed in previous books felt noticeably absent here. I missed the larger community involvement, the found-family atmosphere, and some of the quirky details that made earlier books in the series so memorable. Even the squirrel protection squad that brought personality to previous stories was missing.

Around the three-quarter mark, the story finally started working for me. The characters began acting more like the adults they are, and the suspense plot became more connected to the main story. Penelope finds herself in real danger just as Theo realizes how much she means to him. I also appreciated the way the suspense storyline eventually came together because it was not the direction I expected.

Unfortunately, it took a long time to reach that point. The romance felt stretched out, and there was simply too much slow-burn friendship before the story gained momentum.

By the end, the found-family vibes I had been missing finally appeared, and I was glad I didn’t DNF the book. The autumn and winter mountain setting was lovely, and the ending was sweet, even if it leaned a little cheesy. At least by that point the characters felt more mature and settled into who they were.

Unfortunately, I spent most of the book rolling my eyes at the immaturity, waiting for the story to truly grab my attention, and wondering when it would finally come together. The beginning was okay, the ending was good, but the middle almost lost me completely. While I still love this series and will continue reading Claire Kingsley’s books, this installment was a miss for me and earned three stars.

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